英语改错题二.以下短文有若干错误如次序颠倒等.请指出并改正Itisthedayofaclearandboundlessskytoday.Iamveryhappy,becauseourschoolwantstoholdaHoldouting.Morning6.30wemultipliedbythebusofschoolto

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英语改错题
二.以下短文有若干错误 如 次序颠倒等.请指出并改正
It is the day of a clear and boundless sky today .I am very happy,because our school wants to hold a Hold outing.
Morning 6.30 we multiplied by the bus of school to arrive at forest park
Then we walked around the park and looked at the flowers and plants and take photos.Our teacher asked us to name the plants,and I was very happy that I was the one who was able to name most of the plants.
At noon,we went for a picnic,everyones took a lot of delicious foods.In the end we ate lunch together.I switched some of my snacks with my friends' snacks.After the picnic,we carried on a class meeting,discuss what is seen and heard of this outing.
I am very happy when I got home,and I have learned a lot during the field trip (the outing).
除了时态就没有别的了吗

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首句用的是一般现在时,下面这句里有好几个时态,又是过去,又是一般现在时,时态上没有统一.乱Then we walked around the park and looked at the flowers and plants and take photos下面这句时态也不对carried和discu...