有谁可以帮我看看我写的这几个句子哪里有错误啊,并说出详细原因,事关前程啊,非常非常感激.justshowninthepicture,amanwishestocatchabigfishbutisnot.ASaconsequence,wecanguessthathewillhavetwokind

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有谁可以帮我看看我写的这几个句子哪里有错误啊,并说出详细原因,事关前程啊,非常非常感激.
just shown in the picture,a man wishes to catch a big fish but is not.AS a consequence,we can guess that he will have two kinds of responses,disappointing or persevering.Statistically speaking,nowadays a growing proportion of people cannot bear the burden of broken dream,as a result,causing vast absurd action——suicide,crime,going mad and so on.Fear
希望大家修改的时候不要自行修改太多，就在句子上进行修改，只修改语法错误，而不需要修改句子结构。

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略有瑕疵,大写改过,仅供参考：
just shown in the picture,a man wishes to catch a big fish but HE DOES(but 之前的句子是实意动词,这里不能用 is) not.AS a consequence,we can guess that he will have two kinds of responses,DISAPPOINTMENT or PERSISTENCE(此处应该用名词,因为前面用了名词 responses).Statistically speaking,nowadays a growing proportion of people cannot bear the burden of broken dreamS,as a result,causing vast absurd actionS——suicide,crime,going mad and so on.Fear