看看这封信有没有语法或者格式问题?DearMr.wang：Mynameislin,mymotherisyouseniorschoolclassmatechenwhoisMr.liandMrs.li'sgoodfriend.NowIamstudinghistoryinXihuaUniversity.Iwastoldthatyousendane-mailtoMr.l

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看看这封信有没有语法或者格式问题?
Dear Mr.wang：
My name is lin,my mother is you senior school classmate chen who is Mr.li and Mrs.li's good friend.
Now I am studing history in Xihua University.I was told that you send an e-mail to Mr.li in the Christmas.But you know my Mr.li has a poor Englishi so he read your latter very painful.I hope you can write to him use chinese.
By the way,I don't konw if you have heard that they suffered a car accident.At 2:00 on September 23,accident occurred at Leshan from Chengdu to return to the highway.At next day,I went to visit them at Huaxi Hospital.Their injuries are very heavy,but Mr.li injuries light than aunt lan.They stay a month in the Huaxi Hospital,then they returned to People's Hospital of Jiajiang.
Nowadays,Mr.li has started to work with the crutch because his left leg was fractured.But aunt lan is still convalescing from a wound in home.aunt lan has cervical fractured and her arm and elbow fractured in two places.What's worse,her ring finger and little finger’s nerve damage.But now,she recovery soon,and she can live independently.
Finally,wish your family has good health and good luck.Wish you a happy New Year and the best of everything.
Yours sincerely
lin
由于这封信是要用电子邮件发给一个在外国的叔叔 所以 我希望文中没有任何错误 希望有英语高手给予指点 再下不甚感激！

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孩子,要我怎么说你呢~大致的错给你改了一下,其他就不知道了~：Dear Mr.wang：My name is lin,my mother is your senior school's classmate chen,who is Mr and Mrs li's good friend.Now I am studing history in X...