英语读后感whenallthepeopleleftyouinacruelworld,whatwillyoudo?wheneverythingsaginstwithyou,whatwillyoudo?maybeyouwillthinkthisworldisnotworthyoutostay,butifyoureadthebookyouwillfindthatwhenyouarealivei

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英语读后感
when all the people left you in a cruel world,what will you do?
when everythings aginst with you,what will you do?
maybe you will think this world is not worth you to stay,but if you read the book you will find that when you
are alive is a beautiful thing.
the Protagonist of the book Experienced all the bad things in the world,every Relatives left him and leave the world,
a Poverty life ,even when he is old,he cant buy a Coffin for himself,but he still alive,for aginest with the world.
the sentence i still remember "try the way laugh to cry,alive whit the death"
i think this Attitude of life we must to learn,everyones' life is not perfect and everywhere is death,faced with these
we must learn to learn to alive and laught,because the world cant control us,we must control the world,only do like this
we can have the life of ourselfes.
the writer of this book is yu hua,he is a Vanguard literature writer,maybe you have already read his book called
but i think is the best book he has ever written.
for the last things,remember alive is a beautiful things,you can control your fate
本人英语不是很好 会有很多语法错误 请帮忙批改下

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If all the people left you in a cruel world,what would you do?
If everything is aginst you,what would you do?
Maybe you think this world is not worthy for you to stay, but after reading the book , you will find the beauty of life.
The Protagonists of the book experienced all the bad things in the world,every Relatives left him and leave the world,
a Poverty life ,even when he is old,he cant buy a Coffee for himself,but he still alive,for aginest with the world.
这句话请你把中文完整的句子发上来才好给你准确翻译.不然我只能大概理解你的意思,翻译出来可能不能准确表达你的原意.
The sentence i still remember "try the way laugh to cry,alive whit the death"
i think this Attitude of life we must to learn,
改为：I still remember the sentence "try the way laugh to cry, alive with the death". I think all of us need to learn this attitude towards life.
everyones' life is not perfect and everywhere is death, faced with these we must learn to alive and laught,
改为：No one has a perfect life, anyone must die. We must learn to face these with a smile.
because the world cant control us,we must control the world,only do like this
we can have the life of ourselfes.
改为：We shouldn't let the world control us, we should control the world, and only through this way we lead our own lives.
the writer of this book is yu hua,he is a Vanguard literature writer,
改为：The author is a Vanguard literature writer named Yu Hua.
maybe you have already read his book called
but i think is the best book he has ever written.
改为：You probably have already read his bool , however in my point of view, is the best book he has ever written.
for the last things, remember alive is a beautiful things, you can control your fate
改为：All in all, remember that life is beautiful, and we can control our own fortune.