一篇初二英语作文,请指出语法错误.请打提提意见,title：根据中英文提示,写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、此时在60~70之间的短文.所给英文词汇都必须用上.五一节那天,小红和妈妈一起去南京路.街

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一篇初二英语作文,请指出语法错误.
请打提提意见,
title：根据中英文提示,写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、此时在60~70之间的短文.所给英文词汇都必须用上.
五一节那天,小红和妈妈一起去南京路.街上人很多,有的散步,有的还在照相.街两边的华非常漂亮,这条街上没有公共车和小车.这时,小红发现一个小女孩在商店门口哭泣.她为什么哭?小红和妈妈是怎样做的呢?
Xiao Hong,go Nanjing Street,there be,people,walk around,take photps,beautiful flowers,bus,car,see,cry,find parents,take,the police station,at last
文章：On Labour Day,Xiao Hang and his mother went Nanjing street.On the street,there are many people.They are walked around or take phtos.Two side of the street,there are beautiful fliwers.But there are no buses or cars on the street.At this time.Xiao Hong see a girl that she was crying near the stop gate.So they ask the girl.The girl tell them that she was lost.And then,Xiao Gong and his mother take the girl to ger home.
It’s very kind of them!
请大家给点意见,指出错误吧.如果可以的话,能写篇例文吗?不可以就算了.

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On Labour Day,Xiao Hong and her mother went to Nanjing Streetstreet.On the street,there were many people.Some were walking around,others were taking phtos.On two sides of the street,there were beautiful flowers.But there were no buses or cars on the street.At that timeXiao Hong see a girl crying near the stop gate.So they asked the girl why she was crying.The girl tell them that she was lost.And then,Xiao Hong and her mother took the girl to her home.The girl's family thanked them.Xiao Hong and her mother were very happy.
I think It’s very kind of Xiao Hong and her mother!I love them.