请问这句话这样翻译准确吗两条思绪跨跃一万五千公里的太平洋,交集在一间教室留下的十日时光……ThetwotrainsofthoughtsspanthePacificOceanabout15,000milesandbroughttogetherattimesinatendayslect

Question

请问这句话这样翻译准确吗
两条思绪跨跃一万五千公里的太平洋,交集在一间教室留下的十日时光……
The two trains of thoughts span the Pacific Ocean about 15,000 miles and brought together at times in a ten days lectures in a classrooms

Answer 1

几点建议：
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mile：英里；不是公里
The two trains of thoughts ：两趟思想的列车；比喻意义还是要保留吧
at times ：偶尔,不时；没翻译出来
搞错了,是汉译英啊?
公里：kilometers
交集:get together,或其它；bring together 好像该是被动的
in a ten days lectures：at a ten days' lecture
in a classrooms：in a classroom
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