帮我改一下英语作文吧!明天中午12点前采纳最佳答案.多加些华丽的词,修改语病,MyIntroductionHello!Theboywhoiscuteandfriendlyisme.MynameisRemon.I’meleven.Sosomechildrencallme“lemon”.Iwon’tbeangry

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帮我改一下英语作文吧!明天中午12点前采纳最佳答案.
多加些华丽的词,修改语病,
My Introduction
Hello!The boy who is cute and friendly is me.My name is Remon.I’m eleven.So some children call me “lemon”.I won’t be angry.I like to eat although it’s sour.I’m thin but I’m not short.I’m 155 centimeters tall.I don’t like playing sports.It makes me tired.And my favorite subject is English.I think English is exciting and interesting.The English teacher is funny.I like her class.In her class,I can learn some knowledge and have lots of fun.So I’m good at English.When my classmates can’t answer the questions,I can help them.My hobby is playing chess.I can play well.I’m a chess fan.I entered a chess competition last year.And I won a cup.Do you think I’m a larruping boy?

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My Introduction
Hello!The boy who is cute and friendly is me.My name is Remon.I’m eleven.So some children call me “lemon”.But I won’t be angry.I like to eat them although they’re sour.I’m thin and tall.I don’t like playing sports.And my favorite subject is English.I think English is exciting and interesting.The English teacher is funny.I like her class.In her class,I can learn some knowledge and have lots of fun.So I’m good at English.I can help my classmates when they can’t answer the questions.My hobby is playing chess.I can play well.I’m a chess fan.I entered a chess competition last year.And I won a cup.Do you think I’m a larruping boy?