假定你是李明，你看到周围很多同学都是近视眼，请根据下面所给出的要点提示，给我校英语报写一篇短文。要点提示：1．导致近视的原因：长时间看书、看电视和玩电脑游戏等；

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假定你是李明，你看到周围很多同学都是近视眼，请根据下面所给出的要点提示，给我校英语报写一篇短文。 要点提示： 1．导致近视的原因：长时间看书、看电视和玩电脑游戏等；一些不良的习惯如走路看书、躺着看书等。 2．如何保护视力：坚持做眼保健操；培养良好的读书习惯等。 注意： 1．词数100左右。 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

参考词汇：近视的 short-sighted; 坚持 stick to

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

One possible version：

Look around! Many of us become shortsighted which without doubt has put us into great difficulty and has bad effects on our studies. It isn’t hard to find the reasons. First we often spend too much time reading books watching TV or playing computer games making our eyes too tired. Second there are some bad reading habits that make us have poor eyesight. For example most of us like to read books while walking or lying on the bed. Here are some useful suggestions that we can try. First stick to doing eye exercise. Second try to form good reading habits. After reading for a long time do have a rest by looking at distant things.And when we read we should keep the book 30 to 50 cm away from our eyes.

分 析：
本文是一篇实用文写作，给我校英语报写一篇短文。内容包括：1．描述学生的近视问题；2．分析近视原因（长时间看书、看电视和玩电脑游戏等；一些不良的习惯如走路看书、躺着看书等）； 3．如何预防。在写作时根据情况使用一般现在时。采用三段式结构，分别介绍三个要点。同时使用恰当的连接词和过渡句，以使文章层次清晰，内容连贯。为了增加文章亮点，还要尽量使用多种句式结构，比如定语从句，状语从句，非谓语短语等。

【亮点说明】本篇范文作者首先指出问题。随后作者用 It isn’t hard to find the reasons.引出近视的理由，最后 用Here are some useful suggestions that 提出建议。文章结构清晰，层次分明。在句式结构方面作者使用了状语从句Many of us become shortsighted which without doubt has put us into great difficulty and has bad effects on our studies.定语从句here are some bad reading habits that make us have poor eyesigh和宾语从句I will do what I can to help you。此外文中还使用了First Second For example 等表达使文章浑然一体。

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