求各位英语好手帮我修改一份自我介绍书我是申请去韩国庆北大学做半年交换生的,写了份自我介绍书,请英语达人帮我修改一下,Mynameisxxx,female.IwasbornonJuly23,1990atShandongProvince.AftertheHi

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求各位英语好手帮我修改一份自我介绍书
我是申请去韩国庆北大学做半年交换生的,写了份自我介绍书,请英语达人帮我修改一下,
My name is xxx,female.I was born on July 23,1990 at Shandong Province.After the High-school exam 2008,I went to Beijing from Shandong and got into Renmin University of China to study the Human Resource Management course.
I was born in a harmony and cozy family.My father is an engineer,and my mother used to be a teacher for twelve years.They strictly taught me how to be a perfect person when I was young.They help me develop good habits and healthy,optimistic qualities.I healthily grow up under this nice educational environment.I had an outstanding achievements from childhood and had an outgoing personality,liking to make friends.,with which I had a colourful childhood.
When I entered middle school,my parents became more strict to my study.I used to be monitor because of my good behaviour and score.I was enrolled in the Wencheng High School at September 1st,2005.During that period,I not only studied hard,but also developed many hobbies,such as table tennis and singing.With these good hobbies I had a meaningful high school life.
After three years hardworking,I was finally admitted to Renmin University of China to continue my study at Human Resource Management profession.In order to make my life in the university have enriched,I plan to take full advantage of the time to pass this important four years.
By professional study,I know that the communications between China and Korea at every aspect have developed quickly since the two countries established diplomatic relations in 1992.Especially in recent years China and Korea 's cultural and economic exchanges are on the unprecedented growth.So I have the idea of being an exchange student to Korea.Besides,the first-class faculty and teaching of Kyungpook National University really attract me.
Because of the language barrier,I plan to improve my English and learn some basic Korean during my summer holiday,so that I can study well at Korea.The cost of studying and living in Korea will be offered by my parents.They both have stable jobs and income.They are also in favor of my exchange to Korea.During the semester,I will take advantage of all time to enrich myself by improving my knowledge and learning advanced concepts.I know that the road ahead maybe bumpy,but I believe that through my efforts,I can realize my dream.

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My name is xxx（,female可以去掉).I was born on July 23,1990,Shandong Province.In 2008,I went to Beijing and was accepted into Renmin University of China,major in Human Resource Management course.I was...