这篇英语日记对吗?请英语高手帮忙修改下,Saturday,July10th,Todayisrainyandwindy.Andmymoodisverynice.IhavetogototheWangZiChengLongschooltolearnmathandphysics.Mymomtellmemathandphysicsisverydifficult.Tha

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这篇英语日记对吗?请英语高手帮忙修改下,
Saturday,July 10th,
Today is rainy and windy.And my mood is very nice.I have to go to the Wang Zi Cheng Long school to learn math and physics.My mom tell me math and physics is very difficult.Thave to careful.In the afternoon ,I go to the Books Story with my grandmother.The Books Storys are too crowded,so i don't really enjoy it.I like take show,Happy House,it's veay funny.

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因为是日记,所以可以不用过去式的 ,用现在时也可以
有点像汉语式英语~
1、And my mood is very nice.改为I feel very well.
2、I have to go to the Wang Zi Cheng Long school to learn math and physics.前面可以加But,吧I改为小写.算是句子之间的连词吧,否则句子之间看起来好散.
3、My mom tell me math and physics is very difficult.tell时态不对.可以改为 has told me that
4、Thave to careful.
是汉语试的.
因此My mom tell me math and physics is very difficult.Thave to careful.整体改为My mom has told me taht math and physics is very difficult so i should learn them carefully.
5、在In the afternoon ,I go to the Books Story with my grandmother.中你用的the Books Story ,下一句立马变成The Books Storys ,到底是哪一个?你想说图书馆么?用library.如果就是the Books Story 的话,把下一局的
the Books Storys 改过来,并把The Books Storys are too crowded,中的are 改为is.
另外story的复数形式为stories ,不是storys.
6、it's veay funny 中funny是滑稽的意思,你如果想说有趣的话用fun.