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假如你叫李华,今年进入高三,学习,压力很大,想和父母说说心里话,请你用英文在你的博客上用书信形式表达出来。主要内容如下:知心话感恩感谢父母的关心、鼓励

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假如你叫李华,今年进入高三,学习,压力很大,想和父母说说心里话,请你用英文在你的博客上用书信形式表达出来。主要内容如下:

知心话

感恩

感谢父母的关心、鼓励

对父母的期望

1. 多加交流

2. 适时提供帮助

学习打算

考生自拟(至少写两点)

注意: 1. 短文必须包括所有内容要点,可适当发挥。

2. 词数:120左右(开头与结尾已给出,不计入词数)。

Dear Mom and Dad

Entering Senior Three I really hope to have a heart-to-heart talk with you!

____________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________

____________________________________________________________________

Mom and Dad I am quite confident about my future. Wish you good health and a happy life.

Yours sincerely

 

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Dear Mom and Dad Entering Senior Three I really hope to have a heart-to-heart talk with you!During the years I always feel grateful for your unselfish care and love. Thanks to your constantencouragement I have been making remarkable progress in my study.Since it will be less than one month before the exam I'm under great pressure now. I would appreciate it if you can have a frequent talk with me and provide me with timely help which contributes to my staying in a good state.I am fully aware of the responsibilities I am shouldering. I have made up my mind to make every effort to study for I believe hard work is the key to success. Just as the saying goes "no pains no gains." Meanwhile I will spare some time to participate in sports activities aiming to build up my body and free myself from the heavy load of studies.Mom and Dad I am quite confident about my future. Wish you good health and a happy life.Yours sincerely Li Hua
本文的属于提纲类写作,要求对父母说说心里话,话题切合考生实际,与考生的生活非常贴近,考生有话可说,有很强的可写性。要点是以提纲的形式给出的,要求考生有较强的整合能力,在写作时充分利用连接词,高级句型和词汇,如果可能在文章结尾运用谚语,以使文章的层次更高。应该用合适的连接词,可以适当使用高级的句式和高级的词汇来给文章增色。
【亮点说明】范文使用了很多词组:Thanks to 多亏,making remarkable progress 取得很大的进步,made up my mind to 决定,make every effort to study努力学习, the key to…的关键。 还使用了不少精典句式,如: Since it will be less than one month before the exam I'm under great pressure now. 这句话使用了固定句型,I would appreciate it if you can have a frequent talk with me and provide me with timely help which contributes to my staying in a good state.这句话使用了it做形式宾语和which引导的定语从句,I am fully aware of the responsibilities I am shouldering.这句话使用了定语从句, Meanwhile I will spare some time to participate in sports activities aiming to build up my body and free myself from the heavy work of studies这句话使用了现在分词做状语。文章还恰当地使用了俗语:Just as the saying goes "no pains no gains."。
考点:
提纲类作文 
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