请帮检查一句汉译英的问题原句：我国已明确将“进一步推进政府会计改革,逐步建立政府财务报告制度”写入国家“十二五”规划.译句：Ourcountryhasclearlyput"furtheradvanceofthegovernmentalacc

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请帮检查一句汉译英的问题
原句：我国已明确将“进一步推进政府会计改革,逐步建立政府财务报告制度”写入国家“十二五”规划.
译句：Our country has clearly put "further advance of the governmental accounting reform" and "gradual establishment of the government financial reporting system" into the Twelfth Five-Year Plan for National Economic and Social Development.
请问这个翻译对吗?有哪些地方需要做修正?

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引号内的句子“进一步推进政府会计改革,逐步建立政府财务报告制度”是包含动词的,建议翻译时也翻译成动作“To further promote the reform of government accounting, and gradually establish a government financi...