评价一下这篇作文好在哪里,比如哪句是什么句型,逐句评价,DearTom,I'mgladtolearnthatyouareplanningtolivewithmeduringthissummerholiday.Hearingaboutit,myfamilyareveryhappy.Ilivewithmyparents,whoarefriendly

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评价一下这篇作文好在哪里,比如哪句是什么句型,逐句评价,
Dear Tom,I'm glad to learn that you are planning tolive with me during this summer holiday.Hearing about it,my family are very happy.I live with my parents,who are friendly and caring.Our house is located in the center of the city,a beautiful apartment on the floor.There are three bedrooms,a livingroom,a bathroom and a kitchen.And my mother has already carefully.Prepared a separate room for you.So you can sulf the internet in your own room.Besides it is very convenient to go shopping or take exercise because a park and several supmarkets are.Within walking distnce.If you have any other requirements,please don't nesitate to tell me.I'm looking forward to meeting you.Yours,Li Hua

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I'm glad to learn that you are planning tolive with me during this summer holiday （好像是宾语从句好像.）I live with my parents,who are friendly and caring(定语从句）the center of the city（词组）,a b...