正老师我又来麻烦您啦,这次还是请您帮我看看我写的一段话.Yes,IpreferwaitinguntilMarchafterIfinishedmyIELTStest.MainlybecauseithinkatthattimemyEnglishwouldbebetter,andIreallydonotwantmyEnglisheffect

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正老师我又来麻烦您啦,这次还是请您帮我看看我写的一段话.
Yes,I prefer waiting until March after I finished my IELTS test.Mainly because i think at that time my English would be better,and I really do not want my English effect on my exert during the interview.My second IELTS test is on 14th March,and they will give me my test result within 10 working days,once i received my result,i will email to tell you.
Thank you for your time and consideration.

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第一行 I would prefer to keep waiting
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去掉Mainly because
第二行 （do not ）want my English into effect in exerting myself
（do not ）我认为去掉 更好