自己写的英文自我介绍求修改请英语至少达到6级或专四同学回答注意：1.对句法语法拼写错误予以改正2.如果有贴切的口语表达请予以口语化的表达方式3.可以补充内容或者删

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自己写的英文自我介绍求修改
请英语至少达到6级或专四同学回答
注意：1.对句法语法拼写错误予以改正
2.如果有贴切的口语表达请予以口语化的表达方式
3.可以补充内容或者删减，使逻辑连贯

Good morning Dear Professors, My name
is XXX, come from Tangshan. I'm great honored to meet you here. Last
year, I graduated from light industry college of Hebei united university. After
my graduation, I have thought I really need to get a Master's degree. Resolutely
my father refused .So, I had to got a position in the Beiche Corporation as a bench
worker. Although there have a good income, I never forgot my dream and started
the way to pursue my studies, without resigned, without supported .That days, I
pray for not to work overtime everyday and always stay up late. Now, I'm
finally standing before my honorable professor’s .Thank myself who has worked
so hard and thanks deer Professors who give me this chance. That is all, thank
you.
回答认真者给予附加悬赏，多谢各位

Answer 1

My name is XXX, coming from Tangshan(应该用非谓语). Before my graduation, I thought I really need to go further on my education.（研究生考试在毕业之前）Although that job offered me a good income(there...