日常生活中，每到节假日，许多学生往往结伴外出旅行，或长途或短途，乐享生活。作为同龄人，你也许有自己独到的旅游方式。试推荐一、二种出行方式并陈述其利弊。要求：120词

Question

日常生活中，每到节假日，许多学生往往结伴外出旅行，或长途或短途，乐享生活。作为同龄人，你也许有自己独到的旅游方式。试推荐一、二种出行方式并陈述其利弊。

要求：120词左右（不包括已给出部分）。

Nowadays most students enjoy holiday travelling in daily life.

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Answer 1

One possible version:Nowadays most students enjoy holiday travelling in daily life. Different students choose different transportation means to get refreshed.As for me I would recommend riding a bicycle. A bicycle is far cheaper than other major means of transportation. When you ride with your family or friends you can enjoy more flexibility and freedom. What’s more riding among bicyclists is not only a sort of unusual enjoyment but also an environmentally friendly experience. Of course it takes longer time to get to places.If you go a little farther I would like you to choose public transportation like taking a bus. Although less comfortable the bus is cheaper and more convenient. Besides you don’t have to take the trouble of caring for it. The disadvantage is that it might take you a while to wait in line.In conclusion whichever transportation means you choose safety comes first. (137 words )

分 析：
这是一篇关于陈述利弊的书面表达。根据提问可知先要提出自己的旅游方式，然后进行陈述它的利与弊，此议题贴切生活，对于有旅行经验的同学更为好写点。要严格控制字数要求。不足或超过字数都会扣分。亮点说明：文章结构清晰，运用黄金三段式写法，方式，利弊，结论一目了然。文中用了许多句子结构，如A bicycle is far cheaper than other major means of transportation比较级的运用，not only a sort of unusual enjoyment but also an environmentally friendly experience中not only..but also的运用，The disadvantage is that it might take you a while to wait in line.表语从句与it takes some time to do句型结构的复合，Although less comfortable the bus is cheaper and more convenient省略句的使用，less comfortable 前省略了it is。还运用了许多连词，如As for，What’s more，Of course，Besides这些连词的运用使得段与段、句子与句子间衔接流畅。一些好的短语如get refreshed，a sort of，take the trouble of等短语和一些精准的单词如far cheaper中的far，flexibility and freedom等词的运用使文章不再是千篇一律。这些娴熟的单词运用、句型结构交错显示了考生丰厚的日常积累。
考点：
考查观点陈述类书面表达