英语翻译论文翻译成英文,又两个朋友帮忙翻译了,哪个更好?微博的产生既反映了宏观传播环境的变化,也进一步影响着网络舆论生成模式的变化,它创新了原有的网络传播方式和舆论生成机制.

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英语翻译
论文翻译成英文,又两个朋友帮忙翻译了,哪个更好?
微博的产生既反映了宏观传播环境的变化,也进一步影响着网络舆论生成模式的变化,它创新了原有的网络传播方式和舆论生成机制.本文在分析了微博的舆论生成模式特点的基础上,探讨微博如何在网络上传播公众的话题和意见,以正确影响舆论的,如政府积极进驻微博,加强与网民互动；精心培养微博意见领袖；充分发挥传统媒体的作用；完善法律法规,加强微博管理1.the emergence of Weibo not only reflects the changes of macro speeding environment,but also affects the generating mode changes of network public opinions,
therefore,it improve and innovative on the network mode of transmission and formatin
mechanism.According to the analysis of the features of public opinion generating
mode,this essay discussed Weibo spreads the hot topics and public arguments throuh the Internet for guiding public opinion correctly.For instance,the government
could actively participate in Weibo,reinforce the interaction with netizens;
well-trained Weibo opinion leaders that let the function of traditional media
be exerted adequately; to improve network laws and regulations,strengthening
the management of Weibo.
2.The generation of microblog not only reflects the changes of macro environment of
media,but also influences the variation of the producing model about public
opinion through the Internet.And it has innovated the way of network
communication and the generative mechanism of public opinion.Based on
analyzing the features of public opinions creating model,this article
discusses how microblog spreads public topics and opinions to influence the
thoughts of the public in a correct way,and how the government enhances the
communication with netizen by actively participating into microblog.Moreover,
it can elaborately create the leader of opinions on microblog and bring the
traditional media into play.What's more,the government's intervention in
microblog can help to improve laws and regulations to boost the management ofmicroblog.

Answer 1

都还可以 第一个的用词更好 句子更简练 但不够能表达你的愿意 而且有语法
第二个更贴合你的字义 但是句子不够flow
我会用第一个 在它的基础上改一改