请英语好的朋友帮助纠正一下翻译错误：“我的笔记本在中国是发生了一点故障，键盘的几个按键会。。。”（中文是想要表达的意思，翻译不必和中文完全一样）中文部分：我的笔记本在

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请英语好的朋友帮助纠正一下翻译错误：“我的笔记本在中国是发生了一点故障，键盘的几个按键会。。。”
（中文是想要表达的意思，翻译不必和中文完全一样）
中文部分：
我的笔记本在中国是发生了一点故障，键盘的几个按键会在某些时候失灵，电脑在使用中会突然重启，并且风扇的噪音非常的大，同时散热的效果也不好，经过中国thinkpad服务站点的检测，发现笔记本的主板，风扇和键盘都存在不同程度的问题。不幸的是，那是临近中国的春节，维修站没有这些配件，而我也即将返回悉尼，所以那个时候笔记本没有修理。现在希望能够得到悉尼的维修服务。
我的翻译：
My thinkpad X220 has some problem when I was in China. Some button on my keyboard would not work sometime, and the computer will suddenly restart when I was using for a long time, and the fan is very noise, while the cooling effect is not good. After I send my laptop to the thinkpad station in China, they give me the result, the mother board, the keyboard and the fans have problem. Unfortunately, it was very close Chinese Spring Festival at that time and they didn't have these components at that moment, in another hand, I need return to Sydney very soon, so the laptop did not fixed when I was in China. Now I apply the Warranty service in Australia.

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My thinkpad X220 was slightly broken when I was staying in China. Some keyboard buttons did not work sometimes. Besides, the computer would suddenly restart if I used it for a long time. Also, the fan...