请帮我改一个英语句子的语法,Animpressiveinstanceiscollegestudentsuicideswhichareincreasingatanalarmingrate.本来是"collegestudentsuicidewhichis……"但有同学说要改成“collegestudentsuicideswhichare……"

Question

请帮我改一个英语句子的语法,
An impressive instance is college student suicides which are increasing at an alarming rate.本来是"college student suicide which is……" 但有同学说要改成“college student suicides which are……" 那这样的话前面的“An impressive instance is”也要改吗?怎么改呢?

Answer 1

错了 要改 因为触目惊心的不是学生自杀 而是学生自杀率在上升这个事实
改成表语从句
An impressive instance is that college student suicides are increasing at an alarming rate