英语翻译通过对企业产品成本的特点、企业成本管理特点等几方面的深入分析,指出企业单位成本管理主要存在管理模式陈旧、员工成本意识较弱、成本管理体系不健全等问题,最后,以改变企

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英语翻译
通过对企业产品成本的特点、企业成本管理特点等几方面的深入分析,指出企业单位成本管理主要存在管理模式陈旧、员工成本意识较弱、成本管理体系不健全等问题,最后,以改变企业单位成本管理现状,提升企业核心竞争力,保证企业战略目标实现为宗旨,提出转变成本管理观念,建立科学的成本管理体系,建全内部成本费用控制系统,以及建立必要的管理机制等建议.

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哈,我昨天很晚才看到你的问题,没时间了,今天一早赶了出来.论文要求严肃,因此英语中在正式的论文中也要求用长句子.我用一个句子翻了下来,你瞧一下：
Through the thorough analysis of the characteristics of enterprise product cost, cost management and some other aspects, this paper is dedicated to indicate the main problems existed in enterprise unite cost control such as the old management framework, staff’s low awareness of product cost, unsound management system, etc, and finally put forward the suggestions for the change of cost management concept, the establishment of scientific cost management system, the perfection of internal cost control system and the construction of necessary management mechanism, with an aim to change the current situation of the enterprise unit cost management, to improve the core competency in enterprise and to assure the realization of enterprise strategic goals.
你的是论文吧?我用的主语是按照"论文"的意思来翻的