这句英文有没有错误?有一位名演员曾在一出极为成功的剧目中扮演一个贵族角色,这个贵族已在巴士底狱被关押了20年.在最后一幕中,狱卒手持一封信上场,然后将信交给狱中那位贵族.尽管那

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这句英文有没有错误?
有一位名演员曾在一出极为成功的剧目中扮演一个贵族角色,这个贵族已在巴士底狱被关押了20年.在最后一幕中,狱卒手持一封信上场,然后将信交给狱中那位贵族.尽管那个贵族每场戏都得念一遍那封信.但他还是坚持要求将信的全文写在信纸上
In a excellent drama, A actor had played a nobleman who had been imprisoned in Bastille for twenty years. During the last part of the drama,there was a jailer hold a letter and gave it to the nobleman. Although the noble had to read the letter in every drama, he still asked firmly that the whole content of the letter was written in the letter paper
请就这段英语进行分析,最后别另外翻译

Answer 1

第一行 a excellent.改为an excellent...
第二行 hold改为 who hold
第三行 in every deama改为 every time asked改为insisted
第四行 was 改为be