假如你是某中学的学生李华。前不久，你参加了全国英语演讲比赛并获得了一等奖。请用英语给校刊写一篇文章，谈谈你的体会。内容主要包括：1.付出才有回报；2.收获自信和友谊

Question

假如你是某中学的学生李华。前不久，你参加了全国英语演讲比赛并获得了一等奖。请用英语给校刊写一篇文章，谈谈你的体会。内容主要包括：

1.付出才有回报；

2.收获自信和友谊；

3.感激之情。

注意：1. 词数120左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头语已经写好，不计入总词数。

Looking back to the National English Speaking Competition I took several days ago I have a lot to share with you.

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

Looking back to the National English Speaking Competition I took several days ago I have a lot to share with you.

For a start I feel really delighted that I’ve won the first prize in the competition which makes me understand the true meaning of the proverb “no pains no gains”. Furthermore in the five-day competition I established a close friendship with students from all over our country from whom I’ve learned a lot. More importantly taking this competition has enabled me to overcome my fear of speaking in public thus developing my self-confidence. Additionally I owe many thanks to my tutor and the judges without whose proper help I couldn’t have done such an excellent job.

To sum up I will always cherish this meaningful and memorable experience.

分 析：
这是一篇提纲类作文。假如你是某中学的学生李华。前不久，你参加了全国英语演讲比赛并获得了一等奖。请用英语给校刊写一篇文章，谈谈你的体会。内容主要包括： 1.付出才有回报；2.收获自信和友谊；3.感激之情。需要写的提纲已经给出，需要就此写一篇文章。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型为文章润色。注意字数，词数120左右。

【亮点说明】For a start I feel really delighted that I’ve won the first prize in the competition which makes me understand the true meaning of the proverb “no pains no gains”.这里含有一个宾语从句和一个非限制性定语从句；Furthermore in the five-day competition I established a close friendship with students from all over our country from whom I’ve learned a lot. More importantly taking this competition has enabled me to overcome my fear of speaking in public thus developing my self-confidence.这里含有一个定语从句。

考点：
提纲类书面表达