看一道翻译题借着电筒光,他看见一个人,马上认出那是本地杂货店主经比尔.威尔金斯.我的翻译是：atthesightofafigurebythetorchlight,herecognizedatoncethatitwasBillWilkins,ourlocalgrocer.感觉

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看一道翻译题
借着电筒光,他看见一个人,马上认出那是本地杂货店主经比尔.威尔金斯.
我的翻译是：
at the sight of a figure by the torchlight, he recognized at once that it was Bill Wilkins, our local grocer.
感觉语法不对,要不逻辑有问题,高手指教
新3的原文是In the torchlight, he caught sight of a figure whom he immediately recognized as Bill Wilkins, our local grocer.

Answer 1

原文
With the (help of) torchlight,he caught sight of a figure whom he immediately recognized as Bill Wilkins,our local grocer.
是比较好!