GRE写一篇argument论证作文开头遇到表达困难,现在要反驳一片文章讲一个电视台减少本地新闻增加国家新闻的利害,这是开头,怎么改就不对头的样子,感觉Chinglish,Inthecontextthearguerassertsthatthe

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GRE写一篇argument论证作文开头遇到表达困难,
现在要反驳一片文章讲一个电视台减少本地新闻增加国家新闻的利害,这是开头,怎么改就不对头的样子,感觉Chinglish,
In the context the arguer asserts that the impartial focus of national news more than the weather and local news has leaded to a decreasing advertising contracts with the local businesses and the restoration of the refocus on the weather and local news is required.

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"Doctors have long suspected that secondary infections may keep some patients from healing quickly after severe muscle strain.This hypothesis has now been proved by preliminary results of a study of t...