这句话有错吗?fromnowon,ihavedecidedthatiamreallygoingtogiveup从现在起,我决定了真的要放弃了..这句话得语法有错吗?如果有错该怎样改才不会违反原意再补充一个..我对你已经心淡了怎么说my

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这句话有错吗?
from now on,i have decided that i am really going to give up
从现在起,我决定了真的要放弃了..
这句话得语法有错吗?如果有错该怎样改才不会违反原意
再补充一个..我对你已经心淡了怎么说
my heart has been.....to you?

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I have decided that i am really going to give up from now on.
把from now on的位置调换一下.如果把它放在最前面,它成了主句的时间状语,这样时态就不符了.英语的句子建立在语法关系上,这就要求严格遵守各成分之间的位置关系,这和汉语形成鲜明的对照,汉语的句子更多地靠逻辑关系组织起来.