自己写了一个先短文,请帮忙修改语法错误.我是英语初学者Lately,Ifeelnotgood.Ialwaysworriedaboutsomething.So,Ineedtellmyselfaword.Focusonthesolutionnotonontheproblem.Ihavetargetinhere.Iwillself-fulfilment

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自己写了一个先短文,请帮忙修改语法错误.我是英语初学者
Lately,I feel not good.I always worried about something.So,I need tell myself a word.Focus on the solution not on on the problem.I have target in here.I will self-fulfilment.
Whatever happened everthing.I am strong and real men.I trust intuition of my gut,though everyone have intuition of themselves,but I know how to use it.It is why I am different other folks.
I like a song by ChengLong.It is .When I was happen some troubles and I always think that is song.It is told me,I need seriously treat my life.

Answer 1

1·“So,I need tell myself a word.”need后面+to比较合适,这里need不是
情态动词.
2·还是这句,好象没有“tell sb.a word”这种说法,你可以直接说tell
myself something就可以了.
3·"Focus on the solution not on the problem."这句话focus要用ing形式,永远记住动词原型不能出现在句首,或者你改成I need to tell myself something,focus on the solution not on on the problem.
4· "I have target in here"target是可数名词,要用a target才可以,还有这里的in 最好去掉,没啥用.
5·“I will self-fulfilment.”改成I will fulfill myself.或者I have self-fulfilment.当你拿不准词是动词还是名词的时候,不要乱用,一般
“-ment”是名词.
6·Whatever happened everthing.I am strong and real men.这句改成
“Whatever happened,I am a strong and real man”men是man的复数,要用man!难道你是很多很多的男人么?
7·I trust intuition of my gut,though everyone have intuition of themselves,but I know how to use it.这句不错,但是though与but不能连用的,两者有其一就不能有其二.
8·It is why I am different other folks.It最好改成This,说不上什么原因.习惯吧.be different from这是才正确的搭配
9·When I was happen some troubles and I always think that is song.
记住永远不能说I happen something,只能是Something happens to me.应该改成When some troubles happen.还有think是想什么东西,一般其后接从句.如果要说想到什么,应该用think of.
最后一句话我不是很明白.treat你是想表达什么意思?是说那首歌告诉你么?
总之,感觉你掌握的词汇量有了,但是一些语法错误,比如动词的形式,名词的单复数,虽然看起来是小错误,但是以后对英语学习会有很大障碍.也没啥,每当用个单词的时候想想是可数还是不可数名词啊,动词用什么形式啊,过去式还是一般时还是将来时啊.多注意一下会好的.然后你多看看一些英语文章吧,在保证不出错误的情况下加上一些句型句式.
学习英语是件心细的事情,同时在于积累,因此要耐心,不要急于求成,买本牛津字典,有什么问题就查下,不要怕麻烦,一开始养成良好的习惯以后麻烦就不会变得那么多了.