初学英语,每周一篇书面表达．请求改错!6Todayhavesolareclipse.I'mplanningtowatchit.In8:00Wehavingenglishclass.Weareveryexcite.Sonotattendtoclass.Ourtheaterfeelusmind.Heletusgoouttowatchsolareclipse.Inour

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初学英语,每周一篇书面表达．请求改错!6
Today have solar eclipse.I'm planning to watch it.In 8:00 We having english class.We are very excite.So not attend to class.
Our theater feel us mind.He let us go out to watch solar eclipse.
In our place olny watch half solar eclipse.But the sky also at dark.Everyone think is beautiful!From where i stand ,i think
people interesting in science is good thing.

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第一句就错了,It has solar eclipse today. 或者 Today, it has solar eclipse.第二句： I was planning to watch it. At 8:00, we were having English class. We were every excited. (注意excited）So we were ...