这段英语有错误吗?急!他现在正穿着校服.他有着圆圆的脑袋和又短又黑的头发.他的眼睛小,还带着眼睛.他有一点胖,不过体育还不错.他很健谈,很开朗、活泼,喜欢笑.他很会讲笑话,总是把大家

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这段英语有错误吗?急!
他现在正穿着校服.他有着圆圆的脑袋和又短又黑的头发.他的眼睛小,还带着眼睛.他有一点胖,不过体育还不错.他很健谈,很开朗、活泼,喜欢笑.他很会讲笑话,总是把大家弄得哈哈大笑.他的脾气很好以至于我从未见过他生气.还有,他最喜欢也最擅长画猪所以他总是画猪.当然,他画的猪很可爱.
He is wearing the school uniform now. He has a round head with black and short hair. His eyes are small and he also wears glasses. He is a little fat, but he is not bad at P.E. He is talkative, outgoing and loves to smile. He is good at making jokes so he always makes everyone laugh. He has such a great attitude that I never see him get angry. Also, he likes and is good at drawing pigs, so he always draws pigs. Of course, the pigs he drew is cute.
从翻译和语法上看,有错误吗?

Answer 1

语法上没错.
我不会说make jokes,我会说telling jokes
他的脾气不是attitude是temper
i have never seen him mad
the pigs he draws are cute/the pigs he drew were cute.