不知不觉我们已进入高三年级，高考一天天临近。为了在学习上不落后于同学们，一些同学选择搬出学校寝室，在学校附近租了房子。请就这一现象写一篇英语短文来发表自己的看法

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不知不觉我们已进入高三年级，高考一天天临近。为了在学习上不落后于同学们，一些同学选择搬出学校寝室，在学校附近租了房子。请就这一现象写一篇英语短文来发表自己的看法。内容包括：

1. 在校外租房子的利与弊。（至少各写两点）

2. 你同意还是反对这种做法，并陈述你的理由。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3. 开头语已为你写好（不计入总词数）。

参考词汇：宿舍dormitory

Time seems to speed up as soon as the students step into their final and vital year. The college entrance examination is approaching day by day.

 

 

 

 

 

 

 

Answer 1

One possible version：Time seems to speed up as soon as the students step into their final and vital year. The college entrance examination is approaching day by day. Quite a few students have moved out from their dormitories to live in a rented room near the school to make every minute count.It cannot be denied that they have their own time schedule after classes and easily concentrate on lessons alone in their small room. What’s important with their moms taking care of them they can spare more time for studies. However there exist some disadvantages. For example sometimes their minds go wandering easily without competitors around. Furthermore a student who is left alone to study at rather an easy atmosphere tends to get distracted or even feel tired easily.In spite of the fact that the dorm life is full of fun and friendship noisy songs and shouts in the dorms after evening classes only quiet down long after the blackout at 10:30 p.m leading to a serious lack of sleep .Worse still they don’t make fullest use of time to study so from my perspective I prefer to live in the rented room.

分 析：
本篇书面表达要求就高中生在外租房居住的问题发表自己的看法。根据提示要点分析这篇作文是一篇议论文，可以采用开门见山直入主题的写作手法，先写进入高三后，高考一天天临近。为了在学习上不落后，一些同学选择搬出学校寝室，在学校附近租了房子这一现象，然后分析利弊。按要求利弊均不得少于两点，这要发挥想象，同学们可以从安全性，睡眠等方面去发挥。最后在提出自己的观点看法，可以使用的过渡词汇有in my opinion，in my view等等。此外，要注意文章要使用一般现在时，用第一人称。写作过程中还要考虑到定语从句，状语从句等多种句式的使用以提高作文档次。
【亮点说明】本文采用了议论文经典的三段式布局，首段提出主题，第二段进行分析，第三段发表观点看法。这种结构安排显示了作者清晰的思路，给人以条理分明的感觉。文中的一大亮点是长句的使用，比如首段中Quite a few students have moved out from their dormitories to live in a rented room near the school to make every minute count.和It cannot be denied that they have their own time schedule after classes and easily concentrate on lessons alone in their small room.等，显示了作者深厚的语言功底。此外，What’s important However Furthermore Worse’s still等副词和短语的使用也使句子与句子之间衔接更为自然，紧凑。总之是一篇优秀的范文。
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