我又来了,帮改一下这篇作文啊,写的很烂………Onedayagirlfollowedawhiterabbittofallintoahole.Thenshebeganastrangeandexitingjourney.ShemetmanystrangepeopleandanimalssuchastheMarchHare,Cheshirecat,madhatt

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我又来了,帮改一下这篇作文啊,写的很烂………
One day a girl followed a white rabbit to fall into a hole.Then she began a strange and exiting journey.She met many strange people and animals such as the March Hare,Cheshire cat,mad hatter,red cards Peach Queen and so on.She could eat a piece of cake to become very small as a key.She also could eat one side of the large mushroom to become larger than the tallest tree in the forest.She is the protagonist in the story called ‘Alice's Adventures in Wonderland’.
The girl was named Alice and she was very innocent.In the crazy world,Alice is the only person to keep the rational mind.The strange experience was all dreamed by Alice.The story was written by vivid language and it brought readers to the beautiful world.So many readers were attracted by the interesting wonderland.In the future,this story will be loved by more and more readers.

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One day a girl followed a white rabbit into a hole,then she started a strange but exiting journey.She has met many strange people and animals,including the March Hare,the Cheshire cat,the Mad hatter,the Red Queen and so on.She could become smaller than a key when eating a piece of cake and larger than the tallest tree in the forest if eating a large special mushroom .She was the protagonist of a famous fairy tale book named ‘Alice's Adventure in Wonderland’.
Without doubt,the girl was Alice who was very naive and cute.In that crazy world,Alice was the only person to keep a rational mind.All her adventures in the Wonderland came from her own dream.The story was written vividly,which has brought a beautiful world to all of its readers.Therefore,many readers were attracted deeply by the interesting but adventurous wonderland.I think,in the near future,this story will be loved by more and more readers.
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