新课标卷英语作文这样写得多少分我字迹清晰工整DearsirI'mlihua.I'mtakingsomeenglishcoursesinaenglishschoolI'minterestedinit.However,Ican'tlearnitwellbeacauseofmypoorenglish.Ican;tunderstanditcorrect

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新课标卷 英语作文这样写 得多少分 我字迹清晰 工整
Dear sir
I'm lihua.I 'm taking some english courses in a english school I'm interested in it.However,I can't learn it well beacause of my poor english .I can;t understand it correctly.I book ahead of time .in the hope that learning center will help me.As for the time let's make it on 7 1st .I hope you will be free at that time.You can contact me through E-mail or my phone call 12345678
I need your help eagerly
Look forward to your reple

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错别字,语法错误..I 'm taking some english courses in a (应该是an)english school I'm interested in it.（不要it)
自己检查一下吧
满分10分,我估计有7分