英语大侠帮我看看我翻的这段话有没有语病,there'saSpecialoffersattheTMmarket,everydaycanbuyitemthat'sworth￥7~10withonly￥1.Tm超市有特价活动,每天可以用一元买到价值7～10圆那一件商品

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英语大侠帮我看看我翻的这段话有没有语病,there's a Special offers at the TM market ,every day can buy item that's worth ￥7~10 with only ￥1.Tm 超市有特价活动,每天可以用一元买到价值7～10圆那一件商品

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there's A special offerS 单复数混了,而且从语义上来讲,特价活动很多,一般都是promotion.
There're promotions on TM market, only with 1 yuan, you could buy goods that worth much higher, say ￥10 or even ￥1000.
如果你说7-10,会给人一种1块钱就只能买到一些7-10块的东西,有意思吗?1块能买到几十,上百,上千块的东西,才有魅力.