这里有一篇英语作文,要把文中的语法错误找出来,对于有的简单句,诸位有法子让句子更丰富、更“高深”、更华丽的,也可修改,另外还要加一个结尾,结尾要有关于友谊的升华.限期：2010年8月2

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这里有一篇英语作文,要把文中的语法错误找出来,对于有的简单句,诸位有法子让句子更丰富、更“高深”、更华丽的,也可修改,另外还要加一个结尾,结尾要有关于友谊的升华.限期：2010年8月28日18:00.大家可以把修改后的作文直接发在下面（跟帖）.----by:John
文题：A person who helped me a lot
正文：For me,school life is one of the best part of my life.One of the reason is that I have many friends in school.
My best friend is Tom.He is a boy with black hair.He likes swimming,playing soccer and telling jokes.He is smart,friendly and helpful.
I often shared my joys and sorrows with him and was always listened to carefully.
Two month ago,I got injured in the basketball match.He came to the basketball court immediately.Then,he took me to the hospital.Because of my hurted leg,I can't go to school.He went to hospital and didn't mind spending his time helping me study lessons.I'm very happy that I can have such a good friend.
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文题：A person who helped me a lot 正文：For me,school life is one of the best parts of my life.The most important reason is that I have many friends in school.My best friend is Tom.He is a boy with s...