申请美国本科留学面试问题看看这么说行不行。SELF-INTRODUCTIONItisagreathonorformetostandhere,togiveyouallaself-introduction.AndIwilltrymybesttokeepyourattentionupinthisshortbutwonderfulminutes.Hell

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申请美国本科留学面试问题 看看这么说行不行。
SELF- INTRODUCTION
It is a great honor for me to stand here, to give you all
a self-introduction. And I will try my best to keep your
attention up in this short but wonderful minutes.
Hello, my Chinese name is Cui Hao and my English name is
Raffel. You can call me Raffel.
I am a graduate student from Jilin Province Experienmental
School. I am 18 years old and I feel proud of my personal
characteristics such like persisdent, self-
confidence,positive and out-goning.
Everyone has their different interests, so do I. Although
I am a girl and to my friend's surprise, I like sports
very much, especially football and tennis. As for
football, I think football not only show a team spirt to
audience but also a game links players and audience with
passion. My favorite ticker is Van Baston,and my favorte
club is Arsenal .Well,I love the Netherlands National
Football team. However, I like tennis ,too. My lover
player is Raffel Nadal. He is the most successful
professional player in the world. He is really young, I
think he must be the king of tennis in the future.
Of course, I will never forget my friends and my teachers.
However, If I must choose one to recall, I will choose a
meaningful social experience.
During one week, our class visited Home for the Aged which
is the first time for us to know old people and their
life. We all touched by their hope of life and an active
attitude about life.
We helped old people clean their rooms and we sang songs
for them, which makes them really happy and content. For a
owner of this society, I think each of us is the master of
society, need to contribute to a force, which will make
the society more warmth. If our force accumulate, then it
must be a flame, which light shines in everyone's hearts.
This experience allow us to touch this socity, from which
we know the feelings of love, kindness and the meaning of
life.
汗，还有一段，忘粘了……

Answer 1

倒是不错，你可以加入一些你的家庭背景（因为你有一个美好和富裕的家庭，所以你不会想留在美国，而且有能力负担学费和日常开销，不会打黑工 lol）还有就是你阐明你的出国目的。不用很长，但一定要到点