今天朋友送给我一个苹果和一个香蕉.我对他说了一句谢谢.过了一会,我朋友给了我一支烟,我说我戒烟已经好久了.他看起来优点悲伤.是的.我从来不做自己喜欢做的事.即使我知道这是错的.Toda

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今天朋友送给我一个苹果和一个香蕉.我对他说了一句谢谢.过了一会,我朋友给了我一支烟,我说我戒烟已经好久了.他看起来优点悲伤.是的.我从来不做自己喜欢做的事.即使我知道这是错的.
Today my friend gave away me an apple and a banana.I said thank you to him.After a while my friend gave me one cigarette.I said that I gave up smoking for a long time.He looks like sad.Right!I never do what I like to do.Even I knew that is wrong.
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Today,my friend gave me an apple and a banana.I said thank you to him.(I thanked him).After a while my friend gave me one cigarette.I said that I have given up smoking for a long time.(不过用过去式应该也可以)He looks a little sad.Yes!I never do things that I like to do.
Although I know that is wrong.