来个英文帝,看看这个句子通顺不Butrecently,amountingnumberofmuseumsareopentothepublicforfreeinthattheywanttoattractmorevisitors.可以这么写吗?不通顺的话要怎么改呢?

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来个英文帝,看看这个句子通顺不
But recently,a mounting number of museums are open to the public for free in that they want to attract more visitors.可以这么写吗?不通顺的话要怎么改呢?

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Recently,however,there is a mounting number of museums which all open to the public for free trying to attract more visitors than before.
楼主有些小小的语法错误,are 后面要用 OPENING 但是这样就是进行时,不是很好,还有比较级是不可以再没有比较对象的时候使用.In that 不如换成SO THAT 比较好,但是上面的句子相对比较简单些,推荐楼主用下