这篇初一水平的简单短文,有没有语法错误?中文是这样的,下面是照着翻译的文章,看一下有没有语法错误：今天我跟大家谈谈关于动物的事情.我很喜欢动物,因为我认为动物们都是我们的朋友.

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这篇初一水平的简单短文,有没有语法错误?
中文是这样的,下面是照着翻译的文章,看一下有没有语法错误：
今天我跟大家谈谈关于动物的事情.我很喜欢动物,因为我认为动物们都是我们的朋友.我喜欢狮子,豹子,老虎,狼,狗等等.我喜欢看他们自由地奔跑,它们奔跑起来很酷.我最喜欢的动物是狮子,它们是勇敢,强壮,凶猛的,但有时他们也很可爱.不过我不喜欢蛇,我讨厌、害怕它们.我认为它们很可怖、阴险.不过,我还是希望人们不要伤害任何动物.别忘记,动物是我们的朋友,我们要爱护它们.
Hello everyone~
today i am going to hold a topic about the animals
personally,i am very like animals,beacause i think all the creatures are our friend.
i like lion ,leopard ,tiger,wolf,dog and so on.
i like them especially when they running free,i felt so cool when they running.
Lion is my favourite animal ,cause they are strength,powerful and brave ,but quite cute some time.
i dont like snake,i feel afraid and sick of them,indeed ,i thought them is very fearful.
anyway ,i do hope people dont hurt any kinds of animal and be remember ：animal is our friend.we should protect them and take care of them.
thank you for attend my lecture~

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作者的英语有一定水平.但坦率地说,错误太多了,尤其是细节,太不注意了.1.该大写的地方不大写；2.标点符号错误太多,连中文的句号都用上了；比如 dont,应为 don't3.冠词应用不对,特别是the的用法,如 all the creatures;...