我想问一下我这篇文写得怎样请大家说实话名字就不说了哈!敬爱的老师和亲爱的同学们：我是.,今天我要竞选的职务是英语课代表,是因为我对着英语有着浓厚的兴趣.虽然,我的英语成绩很

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我想问一下我这篇文写得怎样 请大家说实话 名字就不说了哈!
敬爱的老师和亲爱的同学们：
我是.,今天我要竞选的职务是英语课代表,是因为我对着英语有着浓厚的兴趣.
虽然,我的英语成绩很一般,但是我却有一颗不甘落后的心,因为我相信,有付出就有收获.我希望大家能够给我这个机会,这不仅仅是对我的考验,也是对我的信任.我认为当英语课代表,首先就要在英语上给同学们起模范带头作用,我会在以后的生活里努力学习英语,而且我也会认真完成老师给我的任务,当然我也是第二次当了,我对英语课代表的任务也已经十分熟悉了,如果大家认为我以前干得不错的话,就请大家支持我,我一定不会让你们失望的!
如果我当上了这个课代表,我一定会好好工作,好好学习,严于律己,以身作则,把不好的缺点及时改正,我一定会尽职尽责,每天收好作业本,并记录好每一位同学的交作业情况.同学们,请你们支持我,信任我,把你们最宝贵的一票投给我!
Dear teachers and dear classmates:
Everybody is good!I am ...,today I want to run for
position is English lesson representative,because I have strong interest in
English.
Although,my English is still very general,but I have a
unwilling to lag behind heart,because I believe that there's a give have
harvest.I hope you can give me this opportunity,it is not only for my test,
is also to my trust.I think that when English lesson representative,and the
first to be in English to students on model leading role,I will later in life
study English hard,and I will complete the teacher carefully to my task,help
the teacher.Of course I also is the second time,I to English lesson
representative task has also very familiar with,if you think I've done a good
job,you will please you to support me,and I will not let you disappointed!
If I became the lesson representative,I will work hard,study
hard,be strict with oneself,set an example,the bad faults timely correction,
I will be conscientious,every day to the exercise book,and record each
student assignments of the situation.
Classmate,please support me,trust me,put your most valuable a
vote for me!Thank you!

Answer 1

我认为：你这个当了第二次这个就不要说了,另外在说“我如果落选了该怎样”这样