高分求修改语法ThebackgroundofthefilmisaSpanishnationalityhighschool,thereisateacherwhoteachesmathematicusehispassionforteachingandencouragingstudentsreceivingrecognitionandlovebyallthestudents,andthestudentsh

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高分求修改语法
The background of the film is a Spanish nationality high school,there is a teacher who teaches mathematic use his passion for teaching and encouraging students receiving recognition and love by all the students,and the students have also gotten a good result.Even that tall boy,he expose a complex smile when he faced the teacher's inspiration and encouraging,and give a right answer,like a child who first get candy as reward.On the same time,he accepted the teacher from his heart.
Blackboards were appeared a lot of times in this film,from the graffiti in the beginning to calculus in the end,these were anchorage of students’ heart,and they can show changes in whole process of study.When that tall boy relied on the blackboard,it indicated that he got the support from the teacher and trusts him.In addition,nets also appear many times in this movie,there are two different worlds between inside and outside of nets,which showed that students always need to face the society,it is a yearning to yearn for freedom.However,they still have some kinds of fear and confusion about their future.Moreover,when students were studying,lamps also arise frequently; they also were a desire about light and future.
This teacher used two main teaching approaches which were equality and repetition.He believed that everyone can do it,and everyone can follow it.

Answer 1

1.全文时态用过去式,第一句"was a Spanish nationality high school","there was a teacher who teached"
2.第一句中"use his passion"改成"with his passion".
3.我觉得最好把encourage students那里重新提一句.
He encouraged students,recognized and loved by all the students while the students got a good result even that tall boy.
4.expose改成exposed,give改成gave,get改成got,on the same time和后面那句不要了,前面已经提到了.
5.blackboards后面那个were去掉
6.同一句中,show changes in the whole process of study.加个the
7.trusts改成trusted
8.nets also appeared many times in this movie,there were two different worlds.
9.不应该用lamp,应该是说经常有灯光吧,用lamplight also arose frequently,it presented desire for light and future.
改后全文如下：
The background of the film was a Spanish nationality high school, there was a teacher who teaches mathematic with his passion for teaching. He encouraged students, recognized and loved by all the students while the students got a good result even that tall boy. He exposed a complex smile when he faced the teacher's inspiration and encouraging, and gave a right answer, like a child who got candy as reward first time.
Blackboards appeared a lot of times in this film, from the graffiti in the beginning to calculus in the end, these were anchorage of students’ heart, and they could show changes in the whole process of study. When that tall boy relied on the blackboard, it indicated that he got the support from the teacher and trusted him. In addition, nets also appeared many times in this movie, there were two different worlds inside and outside of nets, which showed that students always need to face the society, it is a yearning to yearn for freedom. However, they still had some kinds of fear and confusion about their future. Moreover, when students were studying, lamplight arose frequently; it also presented desire for light and future.
This teacher used two main teaching approaches which were equality and repetition. He believed that everyone can do it, and everyone can follow it.
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