又要麻烦各位帮我修改英语短文了还是那句话改的越狠越地道越好谢谢!Myneighborisarockfan,IknowIshouldn’tsayanythingforhishobby,butitreallyaffectedmylife.Forexample,notlongagoIwaspreparingmy

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又要麻烦各位帮我修改英语短文了 还是那句话 改的越狠越地道越好 谢谢!
My neighbor is a rock fan , I know I shouldn’t say anything for his hobby, but it really affected my life. For example, not long ago I was preparing my report , then an ear-splitting voice stab to my ear. it sounds like a rock music, the sound continued for a long time and I can not concentrate on my work, I thought the less trouble the better so I held back my anger and went to bed , I don’t know when I fall asleep, but I clearly remember that I had black eyes in the next morning.
Another example happened the day before this semester, because the next day is the first day of school, I early have packed the books and set the alarm clock at 8 o’clock , That damn noise suddenly rang from my neighbor's home when I was in bed , I put on my earplug and hope that this can help me not be disturbed, in fact It is really effective, it make me can't hear any sound but include my alarm, late on the first day of school , Nothing could be worse.
I have hinted my neighbors that his hobby bring me much trouble, but he didn’t ashamed never, for example, once we talked about rock music, I said the rock music is really great but it’s not suitable for listening in the evening, because it’s too noisy, But he didn’t seem to understood my meaning ,he even asked me if I like rock music and said he has formed a rock band with his friends and Invited me to go to their rehearsal. I really didn’t know whether to laugh or to cry.
Now my that neighbor has been removed, but I often think of him and his rock music, but just thinking ,I don’t him back, forever.

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My neighbor is a rock fan ,I know I shouldn’t say anything about his hobby,but it really affected my life.For example,not long ago I was preparing my report ,then an ear-splitting voice stabbed to my ear.It sounded like a rock music.The sound continued ringing for a long time,and I could not concentrate on my work.I didn't want to get into troubles so I held back my anger and went to bed.I didn't know at what time I felt asleep,but I clearly remembered that I had black eyes the next morning.
Another thing had happened the day before this semester.Because the next day was the first day of school,I packed the books early and set the alarm clock at 8 o’clock .The noise suddenly rang from my neighbor's home again when I was in bed.I put on my earplug and hoped that this could pretend me from being disturbed.In fact,it was really effective.However,it helped me get rid of any sound including my alarm.Therefore,I was late at the first day of school.Nothing could be worse.
I tried to mention my neighbors that his hobby got me much trouble,but he never felt ashamed.For example,once we talked about rock music,I said the rock music was really great but it was not suitable for listening in the evening because it’s too noisy.He didn’t seem to understand my meaning,and he even asked me if I liked rock music.He said he had a rock band with his friends,and Invited me to go to their rehearsal.I really didn’t know whether I should laugh or cry.
Now my neighbor moved to another place,but sometimes I was remind of him and his rock music.However,it's just a reminding.I don’t want him back,forever.