初学英语写日记,求指导~每日一篇,有不对的地方帮忙改正一下,（8）I'mSally.Iworkedasacustomerserviceinasoftwarecompany.Thejobissobusyeveryday.Ineedtositinfrontofthecomputerandreplytomycostomer'spro

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初学英语写日记,求指导~每日一篇,有不对的地方帮忙改正一下,（8）
I'm Sally.I worked as a customer service in a software company.The job is so busy every day.I need to sit in front of the computer and reply to my costomer's problem ceselessly.I don't know this job is good or not,but I hope I can learn more things from it.
I usually spend the weekend with some friends.We have a lot of activities such as shopping,singing or travelling.I feel so frotunate bacause they are in my side.
Whether my work or life I have been trying,and I hope our future will be better.

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Hi!我看了你的日记,内容很好,只是一些语法读起来有些不顺,［原文］,（我帮你改的）.建议你可以多读一些短故事,不要死背英文书里的句子／语法,因为组成英语句子有几千种方法,建议灵活运用,同时也能增加你对英语的兴趣.
I'm Sally. I worked as a customer service in a software company. [The] (My)
job is so busy every day. I [need] (have) to sit in front of the computer
and reply to my [costomer's] (customer’s) problem [ceaselessly]
(好像没有这个词?建议换成 hourly 小时的). [I don't know this job is good or not] (你说的是“我不知道这份工作好不好”建议换成 I’m not sure if this job
suits me 我不确定这份工作适不适合我) but I hope I can [learn more things] from it （learn what?试举例说明＋学到的好处）.
I usually spend the weekend with
some friends. [We have a lot of activities such as shopping, singing or
travelling.] (I usually spend the weekend shopping with some friends, we also have
other activities such as singing and travelling.) I feel so [frotunate] (fortunate)
[bacause] (because) they are in my side (always by my side).
Whether my work or life I have been trying, and I hope (that) our future will be better.
希望我的回答帮可以帮助你!加油!：）