初学英语写日记,求指导~每日一篇,有不对的地方帮忙改正一下,（11）Mydigestivesystemdoesn'tworkwellrecently.SoIfixedaplanformydiettomorrow.AndIhopeitwouldbeeffective.ADietPlanBreakfast:Twocupsofplainb

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初学英语写日记,求指导~每日一篇,有不对的地方帮忙改正一下,（11）
My digestive system doesn't work well recently.So I fixed a plan for my diet tomorrow.And I hope it would be effective.
A Diet Plan
Breakfast :Two cups of plain boiled water
One pear
A.M.:Kept drinking water
Lunch :A small bowl of noodles
P.M.:Still kept drinking water
Dinner :Two apples

Answer 1

1、如果你想表达的是为明天的饮食制定了一份计划,那我建议这样表达：So I drew up a plan for my tomorrow's diet.或So I made a plan for my tomorrow's diet.
“制定一个计划”可用：draw up a plan或make a plan
“明天的饮食”应用：tomorrow's diet,因为如果你把tomorrow放在句末,那前面的时态就应该用将来时（will fix）,而不应该用过去式.另外fix主要是修理的意思,用在制定计划不是很合适哦
2、你日记所表达的是明天的计划,所以不应用过去时态,应将Kept改为Keep