请各位大虾看看有什么问题,语法啊,语病啊等等,要毕业答辩了,Thisdesignistheintelligentgaswaterheater,anditusestheSTC89C51single-chipmicrocomputerasthecontroller.Atthesametime,thedesignalsoanalysesthefeasi

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请各位大虾看看有什么问题,语法啊,语病啊等等,要毕业答辩了,
This design is the intelligent gas water heater,and it uses the STC89C51 single-chip microcomputer as the controller.At the same time,the design also analyses the feasibility of the intelligent gas water heater which based on the single-chip microcomputer.The design uses temperature sensor,hydraulic pressure sensor,gas solenoid valve,three-phase stepping motor,and so on.In the aspect of the hardware design,the paper has carried on detailed introduction to the following sections:the extension of the smallest single-chip microcomputer system,the power circuit module,the keyboard,the display circuit,the interface circuit,the alarm circuit,the hydraulic pressure detect circuit,the temperature detect circuit,the control circuit of the three-phase stepping motor,the control circuit of the DC motor,and the control circuit of the firelighter and the gas solenoid valve.And the paper also has carried on detailed introduction about the main chips which used in this design,including STC89C51,PMM8713,PCF8591,74HC595,DS18B20.In the aspect of the software design,the paper has carried on detailed introduction to the every function of the intelligent gas water heater,so that the programmers know how to write programs.
The intelligent gas water heater is easy and well designed.By using the software,it can realize the following functions:intelligent detecting water temperature,intelligent heating the water,so it can improve the reliability and accuracy of the intelligent gas water heater.

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This design is an intelligent gas water heater. The main component used is a STC89C51 single-chip microcomputer. At the same time, the design also analyses the feasibility of the intelligent gas water heater which based on the single-chip microcomputer. The circuit is made up of temperature sensor, hydraulic pressure sensor, gas solenoid valve, three-phase stepping motor, and so on. In the aspect of hardware design, the paper following has detail information for these sections, the extension of the smallest single-chip microcomputer system, the power circuit module, the keyboard, the display circuit, the interface circuit, the alarm circuit, the hydraulic pressure detect circuit, the temperature detect circuit, the control circuit of the three-phase stepping motor, the control circuit of the DC motor, the control circuit of the firelighter and the gas solenoid valve. The article also discusses about the main chips which used in this design, including STC89C51, PMM8713, PCF8591, 74HC595 and DS18B20. On the other hand, software design, every function of the intelligent gas water heater is introduced clearly, so that the programmers will be able to know how to program after finishing the paper.
The intelligent gas water heater is simple and well designed. With suitably programming, it can realize the following functions: intelligent detecting water temperature and heating water. So it can improve the reliability and accuracy of the intelligent gas water heater
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