请问这三段英文有没有语法错误或者不通顺的地方?ThankstotherationalworkandsubscriptionthatbipartisandrugpolicesoftheUnitedStateshavedoneinsteadoftheoppositeofthosewhosupportthedecriminalizationofmarijuan

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请问这三段英文有没有语法错误或者不通顺的地方?
Thanks to the rational work and subscription that bipartisan drug polices of the United States have done instead of the opposite of those who support the decriminalization of marijuana,the speed of marijuana use in our nation slow down.
Bipartisan drug polices of United States are working relatively and they have offered up to make the speed of marijuana use slow down in our nation restrictive alien to the faith of those who support the decriminalization of marijuana.
Alien to the faith of those who support the decriminalization of marijuana,the trend balanced ,restrictive,and bipartisan drug polices of United States are working relatively and they have offered up to make the speed of marijuana use slow down in our nation.

Answer 1

第一段中,用了instead of the opposite of ,意思上双重否定变肯定了,个人理解文中原意应指这些人是不支持大麻合法化的,因此不建议这么表达
第二段中,用了restrictive alien to,也是类似错误
第三段中,the trend balanced ,restrictive,and 放在这里,语法错误,也不通顺,最好删除