研究生面试自我介绍2之第一部分,求修改!如题,希望能改正：1.错误的地方2.不够生动的地方.习惯用法什么的.IntroducemyselfGoodmorning,teachers,Iamhonoredtobeinformedtohavethisinterview.mynameisZhangji

Question

研究生面试自我介绍2之第一部分,求修改!
如题,希望能改正：
1.错误的地方
2.不够生动的地方.习惯用法什么的.
Introduce myself
Good morning,teachers,I am honored to be informed to have this interview.my name is Zhangjing,22 years old,I am open-minded,easy to adapt,compatible with my friends,and willing to help others.I come form Luoyang.I am graduating from Luoyang polytechnic institute this June.I major in environmental art design.I hope I could have a chance to finish my university of building technology in Luoyang postgraduate courses I will for a long time.I have confidence,because I have such ability!I'm a girl,treats people the enthusiasm,creative.At the same time,I think I'm going to heart,gingerly everything.I'm looking forward to my postgraduate studies and life.I will soon proof of your choice I is the most intelligent.Thank you for giving me such a precious opportunity.
Introduce my college
I studied in Luoyang polytechnic institute.,Although it is not well know,I still appreciate it,because it offers me a chance to develop my abilities.During my college years,I have made rapid and great progress in many areas,as a student,I work very hard and I always active in various activities.In a word,I learned a lot in my college life.
Introduce my family
In my family,there are three members,my farther,my mother,and I.My parents are workers,they are works very hard,but they always silently the growth of care about me .I love my parents and they love me,too.When I make a success,they are more excited than me,and support me to do better.Even though I failed,instead of blaming,they always share sorrow with me,and encourage me not to give up.During my preparation for graduate examination,the support from my family is always my momentum.Parents‘ love is unselfish,I am deeply affected,so I will do all what I can to repay them.
Introduce my hometown
My hometown is Luoyang,a beautiful city in Henan Province.It is famous for its 少林寺 and 龙门石窟.There are great scenes here,塔林,寺院,西山石窟,and so on.Each year,many people come here for tour and investment.I like my hometown very much.
第二部分同样求助,我想问题应该是在一起的
————————————————
采用者另加50分!
——————————————————
另,本人就是英语差不知道怎么说才来提问的,如二楼那样讲倒是简单,但是我实在不知道怎么改好.请大大说清楚该怎样说才好.

Answer 1

Introduce myselfGood morning. I am honored to be informed of having this interview. My name is Zhangjing. I am 22 years old. According to my friends, I am open-minded, adaptable and easy to get on wit...