请英语高手帮忙看看以下几句有无错误,请帮忙改正,Thepurposeoftheoutlineistoshowusthatdueattentionhastobepaidtoself-confidence.Someareinfavorofarteducation,holdingthattheresultsoftheeducationarehelpful

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请英语高手帮忙看看以下几句有无错误,请帮忙改正,
The purpose of the outline is to show us that due attention has to be paid to self
-confidence.
Some are in favor of art education,holding that the results of the education are helpful for children to nurture children's interest and tap their potentials.

Answer 1

.holding that the results of the education are helpful.这句意思不明.是否想说 :
Some are in favor of art education as it can help nurturing children's interest and tapping their potentials.