Directions：WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese．有的人认为多给予孩子表扬和鼓励有助于他们的成长，有的人则相信及时指出孩子的缺点并适当惩罚能帮助他们改

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Directions：WriteanEnglishcompositionin120-150wordsaccordingtotheinstructionsgivenbelowinChinese．
有的人认为多给予孩子表扬和鼓励有助于他们的成长，有的人则相信及时指出孩子的缺点并适当惩罚能帮助他们改正错误．你支持哪一种教育方式，请谈谈你的看法和理由．
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     The famous Chinese saying that it's the partents'fault if the child is not well taught indicates that family plays a very important role in children's growth．While another idiom goes like this''birds of a feather flock together"，which affirms friends'greart infuence  on people．（高分句型一）Both sayings are ok，but in my point of view，family has the most important infulence on young adults．
    It is obvious that famliy plays an important role in our life．As young adults are not yet independent，mostly they live with their families and then inevitably they have a subtle influence on young adults'character．Adolescence is a vital period of one's life．Many people form their character and outlook on life in their youth．Without parents'instruction or influence，it's easy for children to go bad．（高分句型二）
    On the whole，compared with their peers，family is more important to teenagers．Parents must provide the best environment and behave themselves better．Parents can only give good advice and put them on right roads，and the final forming of their charcter lies in their own hands．