英语翻译“假期见闻”寒假里我和妈妈还有几位叔叔阿姨一起去滑雪.这是我头一次滑雪,我很兴奋不过也有些紧张,到了滑雪场,租好雪具穿戴整齐,就要开始实战了.来之前和妈妈看了教滑雪的

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英语翻译
“假期见闻”
寒假里我和妈妈还有几位叔叔阿姨一起去滑雪.这是我头一次滑雪,我很兴奋不过也有些紧张,到了滑雪场,租好雪具穿戴整齐,就要开始实战了.来之前和妈妈看了教滑雪的视频,但真正操作起来还是挺困难的,在平地上还行,稍微有点坡度就根本控制不了.虽然很累也摔了跤,我还是非常卖力气的学习,后来也小有成绩,我很开心,有机会还要再去滑雪!
这位热心朋友给我的翻译应该是在线译的吧,虽然很感谢这位朋友的热心,但在线翻译有不少地方都是直译,语法上有一些错误的,我的英语不太好但也能发现些问题.希望能有朋友给我一个完整正确的答案,

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My Experience in holidays
In the winter holiday, my mother and I, together with uncles and aunts went skating. As it is my first time to go skating, I am very excited, yet I am a little nervous for I do not know how many times I will fall down. When arriving at the ski resort, we rent skating tools and were dressed well for starting skating. My mother and I had watched the video that taught us how to skate before we came here. However, it is still difficult to put what we learned into practice. It is ok when we skated on the flat ground, but, it was out of control when skating on the places with a bit slope. Though I was tired and fell down several times, I still worked hard to learn it. Later, I made progress and I am happy. I will go skating again as long as I have chances.