英语短文改错,感谢第一句borntobethebasketballplayer,kobebryant第二句showedhisshootingtalentinanearlyage.hehasalways第三句occupiedwithprovinghisskillsonthecourtandimproving第四句himself.

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英语短文改错,感谢 第一句 born to be the basketball player ,kobe bryant 第二句 showed his shooting talent in an early age.he has always 第三句occupied with proving his skills on the court and improving 第四句 himself.having enjoyed a successfully high school basketball 第五句 career,kobe went straight into the nba after graduated.so 第六句 far,kobe has led the lakers to four nba championships.第七句 thus,he is never content with his past achievements.he 第八句 is famous for getting his teammates stay up late practising. 第九句 when he learned a new move,he asks his teammates to practise 第十句 it with him after it is perfect .when you win ,you have to

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1. the → a
2. always后面加上been
3. improving → improved
4. successfully → successful
5. graduated → graduating或graduation
6. √
7. Thus → However
8. teammates和stay中间加入to
9. asks → asked
10. after → until 原创回答团(第159号会员)