来看看我这英语作文帮我改下HeismyfriendHeisaboyHenameisEdHeisastudentintheNo.11MiddeschoolHeontheClass7Grade1Hephonenumberis123Helikesbaseball是介绍一个朋友的明天考试老师说要考（期中的啊

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来看看我这英语作文帮我改下
He is my friend
He is a boy
He name is Ed
He is a student in the No.11 Midde school
He on the Class 7 Grade 1
He phone number is123
He likes base ball
是介绍一个朋友的明天考试老师说要考（期中的啊）

Answer 1

He on the Class 7 Grade 1
He phone number is123
He name is Ed
这两句话 有误
he is on the Class 7 Grade 1
His phone number is 123
His name is ED
要分清 His 和 He
其他的都还好 但全篇文章就是不连贯